Commonwealth essay – Unlikely friends
January 24, 2009 at 7:07 pm | In literary masterpieces | 2 Comments
Even though I didn’t exactly do this on my own free will, I still did put in quite a lot of hard effort on it. Personally, I feel it’s quite quite nasty, with the time restraint and the question restraints. But as Mr Prince said, ” People don’t write texts so that you can sit for an exam; they write because they want to say something.” I’ve always made it a point to write something with my own manifestation of feelings inside, because they are what gives a story life.
Anyway,I’d be astonishingly happy if you, the reader, will read my commonwealth essay which can be downloaded here.( in .pdf format) I don’t mind if you criticise it or use parts of it for some other essay. But please do not plagarize it wholesale and give it to the commonwealth essay competition under your name. It stinks when people do that, but I doubt that would happen; My writing skills are not as good as some Geroge Orwell or J.K Rowling anyway.
抒情闲谈 #3
January 17, 2009 at 11:57 am | In 抒情闲谈 | 3 Comments
开学了，照道理自己应该非常喜悦。
但是，今年开学比前十年来得更吃力。虽然整天带着一个半微笑的脸孔，我行我素的样子，但又何常有人知道，心中的我，却分分秒秒都有一种被日式长刀划伤的感觉。
突然之中想起前年看过的 “EVA 1.0 : You are (not) alone. 主角的朋友因对付使徒一个一个被牺牲，令原本孤立的真嗣感到万分伤感。到最后，电影的名 “You are (not) alone”， 到底是想说主角到最后永远是孤立的，而 “not” 只是一种幻觉，一种不可能完成的希望，还是想说虽然幻觉上好似孤立，但事实上是有很多人在他身旁的，我可能永远也得不到一个结论。
在这里，我也不想多说什么，本人擅长以抽象画面来让人了解自己的想法，聪明的自然了解我的心思，不聪明的，花点时间慢慢想吧！
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什么地方？为何这么暗呢？虽然月光极亮，但始终无法把前面的路照亮。
在走廊的尾端，怎么会有这么多对眼睛，那到底是谁？
眼睛，又为何突然泛红呢？好似鲜血般的红色 – 令人脸青唇白。
好想跑。好想跑！
但是用力跑，却跑不到出口。出口，难道没有出口？！
地图，背包有地图！
翻出地图，但地图在此刻长了翅膀，飞入黎明的空。
不能飞走，地图不能飞走的！抓住了在挣扎的地图，无意中把它撕成两半。
随着半个地图寻找出路，但万万没想到，手上地图慢慢化成灰。
暗地无限，从去和从，束手无策。
因为身上的地图，原来是镜花水月。
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